Whew !
Hey there =D
as a ''thank you'' for the reviews you have done till now, i shall give you a very big review to =D.
I realy loved the start. it is very original and it gives a good feeling.
Also the bass i hear is very nice, it has a nice delay on it which fills the song on that moment.
at 0.25 the bass starts to get a nice 4 note phrase. after that the build started to come up, and i realy felt a climax boiling up. i did not expect what you did after the climax =P. i was thinking it was 155bpm or something but this should be 180bpm+ xD. but actually it turned out very great. l like it.
But perhaps you could have bring in the melody at bit earlier cause only a bass and a kick starts to get repetitive, especially at a high speed.
You managed to bring in variation very quickly though.
When the real melody was done filtering in, you changed the bass again.
Perhaps you could add a counterbassline to the bass, perhaps that would sound good. coming back on that first melody : I realy liked it, it was fast and not boring to listen to, and it got variated with that powerfull synth thing.
What i wouldnt have expeted (and what was totally kickass) was that you made a full melody out of that powersynth. that totally rocks and made a very nice variation. awesome !.
SCORE :
(some things i find important in a song)
BASS 4/5
PERCUSSION 5/5
MELODY SYNTH 4/5
MELODY ITSELF 3/5
VARIATION 4/5
PROGRESSION 4/5
24 out of 30 = 8
some criticm :
BASS
The bass was awesome as i already said, it changed a hell lot.
Many basses get boring after a while, but this one didnt.
PERCUSSION
I realy loved the percussion, you had a lot of it in your song, and i sounds great !.
MELODY SYNTH
I could not recognize the melody, so i dont think i know the VSTI, but the synths sure were fantastic.
MELODY ITSELF
It variated often, but they were rather short.
Well, 16 bar is not short, (when its lower than 180 bpm =P).
Perhaps you could try to make even more catchyer melodies and some longer ones.
VARIATION
Nothing to complain about that.
Its is very nicely done, and i didnt got bored a sec. (perhaps 2 or 3 seconds).
PROGRESSION
Everything was synced very well, and there was no single clipping mistake.
However, at the climax when a man says ''lets go'' i felt slightly out of beat for a second though, but that is nothing important ^^
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Well that was my review.
It was my longest one till now, and very hard to make xD.
It is hard to explain everything in a song, and im not very good at it i think.
My english grammar is'nt good either, so it became even harder =P.
I have a lot of respect for you writing review like that xD.
Take Care,
St0rmChaser
8/10 5/5éd